成人高考英语作文万能开头和结尾（成人高考英语作文万能作文）

文/刘宝彩/天津

我的回答是：雅思英语和高考英语区别还是挺大的。例如，仅就雅思写作，笔者对网友提出的看法如下。

雅思英语和高考英语区别还是挺大的。例如，仅就雅思写作，笔者对网友提出的看法如下。

英语写作在雅思考试中是重点和难点之一，与高考英语写作在要求上完全不同：雅思是借助英语逻辑思维写英语；高中借助英语模板和范文套作写英语。所以你需要一段时间专门训练才能写出雅思优质的英语作文，而不是高考“模板或套作的”作文，因此我建议你暂时不要急于考雅思，而要积极地作优质雅思写作训练（丢弃高中模板范文思维之惯性的写作英语的习惯）。

为你参考，笔者以“感谢一个人”为题，分别用雅思逻辑思维英语作文与高考英语模板套作作文各写一篇，让你看一下作对比。

英语作文已知条件：感谢一个人需要满足三项要求：1这个人什么品质值得感动了你；2他或她做了什么事情值得你感谢；3表达这件事对你的影响。

一、雅思英语作文

Dear Mr. Walt, July 07, 20 – –

I write you a letter expressing my heartfelt gratitude to you for your greatly kind help to me in solving difficulty meeting with traffic accident at about 10:30 on 3 Jun., 20–.

On this unfortunate occasion, you showed me the dedication and the talent for rushing to my rescue, which has really impressed me with your kindness, during my extensive injury, as I was knocked off my feet by a taxi.

This time in that day, a kind-hearted helper was expected to come to my aid in time undoubtedly, in my view. It is you, the kind-hearted helper, that came to me in my emergence, getting me out of a dangerous situation to make a call to medical-service ambulance.

By this, I would be enabled to know how much I appreciate the greatly valuable job you have done in amount of time you made available to me during injury I suffered. That means you are a highly-respected person who is well-disposed toward me most importantly.

***s this reminds me, my condition might have been much serious, without your timely assistance. This makes me have a truly unforgettable experience, keeping me lucky to be alive.

***s is told to me one month later, in this respect, your manual means are in use of my breathing to restore in me that forces air into and out of my lungs, in a rhythmic way, based on mouth by mouth. This is to assist me in breathing easily.

***ccordingly, in response to the injury, your greatly-wise first aid to me in difficulty has saved much time to ensure my condition improved satisfactorily. This shows you acted from selfless motives, to my really-deep delight, helping me with the serious trouble.

These are regarded as being most desirable for the quality all people should have in modern society, too. This indicates you have set them an good example, in my mind, doing all you could to spread love everywhere you go, and letting no one come to you without leaving happier.

***s is believed from this, you succeed in winning the confidence in people, which helps make the world more beautiful.

I brought back to so much warm feeling of great friendship which has been set up, by your great help, at short time during the accident. ***s is known to you by this greetings, my wife also joins me both in sending you our sincere regards and expressing our renewed thanks to you for your thoughtfulness and hospitality.

Yours sincerely,

Liming

二、再看一看，高考英语作文思维写英语

Dear Mr. Walt,

I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.

Most importantly, if it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid, I fear that the consequences might have been much serious. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.

***lthough nowadays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish which is the most desirable quality we are looking for, we see very few people practice what they preach. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.

My thanks to you for the help you render me are beyond words.

Yours faithfully,

Liming

从上述雅思英语作文和高考英语作文比较看出：

高考英文写作没有从英文逻辑思维推理方面，根据三项要求（1这个人什么品质值得感动了你；2他或她做了什么事情值得你感谢；3表达这件事对你的影响）而写出英语作文，只是把三点提示直译出来，造成“无因无果”，因此出现“逻辑断层”难免缺少英语逻辑思维写作英语作文之“味道”了。

再看雅思英文写作方法，即，如下六方法写好英语作文：

㈠《一因一果、多因多果、一因多果和多因一果的英语相互转换法》；㈡《逻辑与语法沟通设计法》；㈢《逻辑与词法沟通法》；㈣《逻辑与“英语基本动词与变形句对接”沟通组合法 》；㈤《学、用英语指南图法》；㈥《明逻辑、暗逻辑使用法》。

六方法是依据英语逻辑思维写作规律，阐述了英语写作的内容并挖掘出在写作中所产生的内在和外在原因及其结果，作出合乎逻辑推理、判断，以认识客观情况的个性心理品质和本真思考规律，这样才能写出具有独立创造思维价值的雅思高分英语议论文的作文。

为了更进一步理解雅思英语作文和高考英语作文写作逻辑性和思想性到底有多大差异，现把这两篇英语作文都用中译文写出，以比对思想逻辑之优劣。

雅思英语作文中译文

感谢信

沃尔特先生：

我给你写信衷心感谢你于20–年6月7日10:30时，在我遇到交通事故中提供非常大的帮助为我解决困难。你正是以奉献精神和聪明才智，才让我在被出租车撞飞倒地致多处受伤的情况下，得到迅速救助，因此真的让我万分感激。

3日出事的时候，我期盼着有好心人能快来救我；你就是这位好心人恰巧就出现在情况万分危机的我的面前，并及时呼叫救护车送医让我得以获救。由此我多么得感谢你对我受伤而争取生命救助时间所作出的巨大努力。所以最大的价值在于：你是对人怀有善意而深受尊敬的人。

这样让我想到：没有你的及时相助，我的健康状况可能是非常令人担忧的。这让我活下来算是幸运的，因此真是一次难忘的经历。之所以说难忘是因为你为我做人工呼吸，由此阻止了我停止呼吸。

也就是说，你对危难的我进行敏捷的急救，为我健康状况满意的改善，赢得了时间。这样看来你帮助我解决很大的困难是出于最高尚的目的，真是令我欣喜。

这也是现代社会人们应具备的品格。让我感觉到，你尽了你所能做的最大努力，把爱洒向你所到之处，让人觉得有新的快乐、越来越快乐，所以给人们树立了好榜样。由此相信你赢得了人们的信任，这有助于让世界变得越来越美好。

通过在交通事故不长时间中你的帮助，我从你身上带回了所建立起这么多友谊和具有善良的情感。因此我和我妻子要向你致以诚挚的敬意，还要再次感谢你对我的体贴入微关照和热情友好。

敬上。 李明

20–年6月7日

接着来看一下，高考英语思维作文中译文

我写信衷心地感谢你的帮助。我提及那天连人带车被出租车撞飞的那件不幸的事故。最重要的是：这件事如不是你对我施以及时急救的帮助，我担心结果可能是非常严重的,人人同意，在这种紧急情况下，你机敏的反应导致这满意的结果。

尽管现在多数人们谈论需要无私，这是我们寻求的最渴望的品质，但是我们知道很少人实践其诺言。如果有更多像你一样的人，那么这世界将是一个非常好的地方。对于你帮助我的感谢是难以言表的。

总结：

高考英语写作没有从英文逻辑思维推理方面，根据三项要求<1这个人什么品质值得感动了你；2他或她做了什么事情值得你感谢；3表达这件事对你的影响>来写，只是把三项要求直译出来写，造成“无因无果”，英语“逻辑断层”所以没有英语逻辑思维“味道”了。

这就是说：用英语逻辑思维，不用中文思维，写作雅思英文作文，能得高分！所以中式思维表达英文直接翻译英文，不符合英文习惯表达思想内容的习惯。用逻辑思维写英语对考生的启示意义巨大。

这源于基于丰富的思想写英语作文，即，锁定高分“通道”！写作英语作文从英语逻辑思维的“原因句←提示句→结果句”三步骤“黄金三宝”开始，让大考英语写作考生写出思想自由“航行”，达到“写作思路连贯；观点逻辑不漏、论据过渡不丢”之优秀雅思英语写作的目标，最终雅思英语写作得高分的英语作文就水到渠成了。

基于上述情况，往往雅思考生在最初英文写作上，需要学习逻辑思维六种方法写作英语的，才能迎合雅思判（阅）卷需求让雅思考生得高分的。

如此说，笔者对本文标题——刚刚高考完英语得140分，请问一个月内能考上雅思吗——之回答是：不是不同意的，而是持有保留意见的。

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